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I like you
Not as a friend
I mean...
You are my friend
I just like you
More than that
More than friends
That's what I want

You're quiet
This is not good
Did I say something?
Do you hate me now?
I should leave
This was a bad decision
Forget I said anything
This never happened

Okay
I can't go back now
Just respond
Any response
You can reject me
I won't be upset
No, I will
But I'll accept it

On second thought
Let just rewind
I won't say how I feel
You won't be confused
I won't be nervous
This never happened
We'll just stay friends
Forever

How I feel about that?
It doesn't matter...
I'll get over it
Over you
In fact
I'm already over you
But deep down
I still like you

I still really like you
This is for valentine's day. This is basically how I picture me telling my crush how I feel when I do. In other words, a lot of word vomitting and regret. Anyway, I still hate the holiday, but this is for all those people with secret crushes like me who are scared of ruining everything by telling them...
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Art-Gem Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a really cute...piece? I wanna say poem, but I'm not sure...lol, sorry :XD:

lol but really, it's good writing, I like it :meow:
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DarkRose407 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, it's a poem. I'm glad you liked it! ^^ Also thanks for the favorite!
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Art-Gem Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, okay ^^;

Yeah, I really like it, you're welcome! :aww:
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candyzombielord Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sometimes you just have to take a risk, but sometimes you just don't want to get hurt to... maybe that same person likes you to. Sometimes you can even regret telling your crush how you feel inside, because by the time you do it could be to late.

But well done as always.
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Morpheus1035 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can identify with this, too much...
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DarkRose407 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Not a fun feeling...
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Morpheus1035 Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Tell me about it...
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